The chart shows the different levels of post-school qualifications in Australia and the proportion of men and women who held them in 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart depicts the percentage of Vocational Diploma
male
and Fix the agreement mistake
males
female
possessing a variety of qualifications after completing school in Australia in the year 1999. Fix the agreement mistake
females
Overall
, the highest percentage of male
possessedFix the agreement mistake
males
Correct article usage
a
while
the lowest percentage of female
category was Fix the agreement mistake
females
also
from the same qualification.
To begin
with, 70% of men completed Postgraduation which is more than twice the percent
of women who had Postgraduate Replace the word
percentage
diploma
. Fix the agreement mistake
diplomas
Similarly
, Correct article usage
a Masters
Masters
degree was Change noun form
Masters's
Master's
also
more prominent in boys than girls. Moving further
, Vocational
diploma course showed a significant difference of almost 80 per cent between both genders.
It is evident that girls Correct article usage
the Vocational
perferred
the Undergraduate program more than boys in the year specified with Correct your spelling
preferred
the
difference margin of 35%. A similar trend was seen in the Bachelor program as well but the difference Correct article usage
a
beween
the genders was almost 5 per cent. To add on, 50% of boys and 45% of girls Correct your spelling
between
possed
a Verb problem
possessed
bachelor
degree in 1999.Change noun form
bachelor's
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