A friend of yours has always admired your car. You have now decided to sell it. Write a letter to your friend to ask if he is interested in buying your car. In your letter, – explain why you are selling your car – describe the good points and any bad points about your car – suggest the friend visits you to see and drive your car

Dear Shaun, Hope you are doing well. I am writing to inform you that I am going to sell my
as I am moving to Africa for my new job and transferring my
there would incur a lot of expense for me. I remember you always admiring my
and you wanted a same brand
for yourself as well.
, I am writing to inform you about selling my
. As you are already aware, I have kept and maintained my
in a very good condition and
not many miles are run on
as it is only 5 years old and used to drive to the office and back home. The good point about my
is its mileage. It is a very fuel efficient
it will be very economical to use in the city. One concern with respect to the
is its servicing. For servicing, it has to be taken to a nearby city as its service station and spare parts are not available in the town. So twice a year, it has to be serviced from outside the city, but
that is
manageable I think. Why don't you plan to come and visit me and try driving my
yourself? You can come on any weekend, before the end of March as I will leave in April for my new job so I have to sell it before that. Looking forward to your visit soon. Best Wishes, John
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