The table below displays the projected costings over the next five years in US dollars for three environmental projects aimed at sustainable forestry.
The table below displays the projected costings over the next five
years
in US dollars
for three environmental projects aimed at sustainable forestry. The pie chart illustrates the expected allocation of expenditure breakdown for the first
year as the projects are set up.
Overall
in the table
we can Add a comma
,table
can
see that costs will Remove the redundancy
apply
have fluctuated
Wrong verb form
fluctuate
by
the next five Change preposition
in
years
. In West Africa and Central America
costings will have dropped dramatically Add a comma
,America
at
the Change preposition
in
first
4 years
. Whereas
in South-east
Asia Correct your spelling
Southeast
costing
will have fallen Wrong verb form
the cost
at
the Change preposition
in
only
Correct word choice
apply
first
two years
. Projected expenditure in year 1 vast majority is the salaries and set-up costs .
West Africa
expenditure is going to decrease in the next four Change noun form
Africa's
years
and rise 1
Change preposition
by 1
million
dollars
at
the fifth year. Central America Change preposition
in
also
going to have boom
, but after two Correct article usage
a boom
years
it will stay constant , only 5 million
dollars
. South -east
Asia going to Correct your spelling
Southeast
down
to 10 Add a missing verb
be down
million
dollars
at the
Correct article usage
apply
first
, but after it will have had a rocket , forty and fifty million
dollars
.
Set-up costs will have amounted 30
per cent and salaries fifty per cent. The remaining 20% will be for training and Change preposition
to 30
for
office expenses.Change preposition
apply
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