The maps below provide the variations which have occured at Queen Mary since its construction in 1960.
The maps below provide the variations which have
occured
at Queen Mary since its construction in 1960.
Correct your spelling
occurred
Overall
,in Queen Mary Hospital only part of Hospital
has Correct article usage
the Hospital
been remained
without any changes Change to the active voice
remained
during
all the time. Change preposition
apply
Furthermore
, by 1980, Shopping
Correct article usage
the Shopping
Centre
and Farmland both had been shut down. After that, there had been addition
Add an article
an addition
as
Cancer Correct your spelling
a
centre
, Pharmasy
and Nursing School Correct your spelling
pharmacy
instead
of what it was.
Moreover
, between 1980 and 2000, further
developments were significant
expansion of Add an article
the significant
a significant
Cancer
Correct article usage
the Cancer
Centre
in comparison with Nursing
Add an article
a Nursing
the Nursing
school
that halved in size. Fix the agreement mistake
schools
Likewise
, Car Park had been reconstructed just in 2000, it also
had diminished in form, although
, this
section had a great shape as Hospital
in the initial stages.
It is noticeable that Correct article usage
a Hospital
Shopping
Correct article usage
the Shopping
Centre
and Farmland were not relevant for health institutions in
the beginning of Change the preposition
at
building
. Correct article usage
the building
And in
general, Correct word choice
In
Cancer
Correct article usage
the Cancer
Centre
had been
taken place Unnecessary verb
apply
the
vast area of Change preposition
in the
this
spot with a large breakthrough by 2000.Submitted by dnm.best on
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