The charts below show the production of different types of citrus fruit in Brazil, China, and the USA. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The graphs give information about the production of several kinds of fruit in three nations ( Brazil, China and the USA).
Overall
, oranges
dominate the production in Brazil and the USA. In contrast
, in China, the tangerines
had the highest percentage.
According to
what is shown, the highest percentage among all countries and fruit was in Brazil ( oranges
) at around 87%, while
tangerines
( 6% ), lemons (5% ), grapefruit and others (1% ) each. In the USA, oranges
were the largest number of fruit (73% ), while
grapefruit was the second in the same country ( 16%), lemons ( 7% ), tangerines
( 3% ) and others (1% ).
On the other hand
, China was different, the highest number was tangerines
( 73% ) while
in oranges
( 18%), lemons, grapefruit (3% ) each, and others ( 2% ).Submitted by Aziz
on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words oranges, tangerines with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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