The charts below show the production of different types of citrus fruit in Brazil, China, and the USA. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graphs give information about the production of several kinds of fruit in three nations ( Brazil, China and the USA).
Overall
, Linking Words
oranges
dominate the production in Brazil and the USA. Use synonyms
In contrast
, in China, the Linking Words
tangerines
had the highest percentage.
Use synonyms
According to
what is shown, the highest percentage among all countries and fruit was in Brazil ( Linking Words
oranges
) at around 87%, Use synonyms
while
Linking Words
tangerines
( 6% ), lemons (5% ), grapefruit and others (1% ) each. In the USA, Use synonyms
oranges
were the largest number of fruit (73% ), Use synonyms
while
grapefruit was the second in the same country ( 16%), lemons ( 7% ), Linking Words
tangerines
( 3% ) and others (1% ).
Use synonyms
On the other hand
, China was different, the highest number was Linking Words
tangerines
( 73% ) Use synonyms
while
in Linking Words
oranges
( 18%), lemons, grapefruit (3% ) each, and others ( 2% ).Use synonyms
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words oranges, tangerines with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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