The line graph below shows the average monthly temperatures in three major cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given graph illustrates the average
temperature
in three different countries per month
.The degree
of temperature
has been counted by Celcius.
Overall
, throughout the months Dubai
has been the hottest city.
It can be clearly seen that,
the Remove the comma
apply
degree
of temperature
is 25 in Sydney in January
which is known as the first month
of winter.However
, the weather gets colder since March and continues till August which is the coldest month
of the year in Sydney. Now degree
is below (15). Although
the weather gets gradually hotter after that, January
remains the hottest month
. Indicators are different for Dubai
and Paris
. Weather is freezing in January
in both cities it is 20 degrees in Dubai
and only 5 degrees in Paris
. Thus
, January
is a
coldest Change the article
the
month
in Paris
. As it is seen from the graph, July and August are pretty warm in both countries, namely Paris
and Dubai
and even in those months degree
of heat is levelled off in Paris
(20).By comparison
, since September temperature
has gone slightly down in Dubai
and Paris
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