The line graph below shows the average monthly temperatures in three major cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below shows the average monthly temperatures in three major cities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given graph illustrates the average
temperature
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in three different countries per
month
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.The
degree
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of
temperature
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has been counted by Celcius.
Overall
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, throughout the months
Dubai
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has been the hottest city. It can be clearly seen that
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the
degree
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of
temperature
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is 25 in Sydney in
January
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which is known as the first
month
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of winter.
However
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, the weather gets colder since March and continues till August which is the coldest
month
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of the year in Sydney. Now
degree
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is below (15).
Although
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the weather gets gradually hotter after that,
January
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remains the hottest
month
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. Indicators are different for
Dubai
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and
Paris
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. Weather is freezing in
January
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in both cities it is 20 degrees in
Dubai
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and only 5 degrees in
Paris
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.
Thus
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,
January
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is
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coldest
month
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in
Paris
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. As it is seen from the graph, July and August are pretty warm in both countries, namely
Paris
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and
Dubai
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and even in those months
degree
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of heat is levelled off in
Paris
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(20).
By comparison
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, since September
temperature
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has gone slightly down in
Dubai
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and
Paris
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.
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