The charts below give information about world spending and population.

The charts below give information about world spending and population.
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The pie charts illustrate the proportion of global expenditure on four types of items and the
world
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population on four
continents
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.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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people
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spend a little budget on clothing,
whereas
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they spend the most on other categories. In terms of the total number of
people
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in the
world
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, Asia continent is the biggest portion
while
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other
continents
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apart of the list have the least number of residents.
According to
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the first pie chart,
people
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spend the most on food, with almost a quarter. Followed by transportation and housing, account for 18% and 12%, respectively.
Although
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clothing expenditure is distributed by merely 6%, the remaining 40% is categorised into other types of items. The second pie chart shows information about the
world
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population divided by four
continents
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. Certainly, Asia
people
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are the most populated with just under 60% of the
world
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's population. Europe and the Americas
continents
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rank second at 14%
while
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fewer
people
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are in Africa, accounting for 10% of the total. Only 10% is left for other
continents
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which are not mentioned.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words world, continents, people with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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