In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

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trend in some countries for renting a

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two

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positive

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house

rather than renting one is very

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a positive situation.

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so many benefits. Every

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can

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people

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useful

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government should support

people

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another nation

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for

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people

want to go to different places.

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the negative side of renting a

house

is that

people

feel unsafe. But,

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have the feeling that they are living in rented apartments.

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to live in a one place

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even

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owning a

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government should even support those

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renting

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have

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more positive sides. So, I think renting a Positive situation

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house

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