In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

Nowadays, are is
an
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trend in some countries for renting a
house
. As every coin have two sides in the same ways
this
have
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two
effect
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positive
as well as
negative. I think owning a
house
rather than renting one is very
imporatant
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important
for
people
. I think
this
have
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a positive situation.
Firstly
, On the positive side of renting a
house
, is a
people
can go where they like. Renting a
house
have
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so many benefits. Every
people
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can
rent
a
house
. In many
case
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a
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people
can only
rent
apartment
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apartments
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.
For example
,
a
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people
who are doing work like vlogging
they
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have to go from one place to another place for
them
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renting a
house
is
very
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useful
things
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.
Hence
,
a
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government should support
people
in
rent
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renting
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a
house
. The public like a student who are living in
the
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another nation
for
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study
prepose
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for
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them
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rent
is
better
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options
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. The main
case
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for
this
is that
because
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people
want to go to different places.
Secondly
,
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the negative side of renting a
house
is that
people
feel unsafe. But,
People
have the feeling that they are living in rented apartments.
For example
, if a person
want
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to live in a one place
who
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have
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even
working
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there for years
for
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them
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owning a
house
is better.
Thirdly
,
However
,
a
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government should even support those
people
who want to buy a
house
.
To conclude
,
as
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renting
house
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have
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more positive sides. So, I think renting a Positive situation
as well as
renting
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house
is
better
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a better
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option.
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