Increasing numbers of students are going to university instead of working after high school. What are the advantages and disadvantages for young people who do this?
The number of
students
directly enrolling in university after completing high school
has been on a significant rise. This
poses numerous benefits including no gap in an education
, resulting in an increasing focus during graduate school
but there are also
numerous drawbacks to consider here.
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Thirdly
, it can offer good concentration to the students
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students
don’t focus well enough on their studies and can become victims of bad habits such
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, such
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graduates need to deal with paltry pay due to
absence
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