The chart below shows global sales of the top five mobile phone brands between 2009 and 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words
The given bar chart illustrates amounts of world wild
sales
of the top five phone manufacturers which are Samsung
, Apple
, Nokia
, LG, and ZTE in millions in three time periods between 2009 and 2013.
As an overview, it can be seen that Nokia
sold the most mobile phones in both 2009 and 2011. However
, the highest number of global sales
in 2013 belongs to Samsung
. Also
, both Samsung
and Apple
experienced significant increases during the given periods.
As it
can be observed, Correct pronoun usage
apply
Nokia
had the highest amount of sales
with approximately 450 million
in revenue from mobile phones in 2009. Meanwhile, in 2011 Nokia
experienced a negligible fall losing roughly 10 million
of its income from selling this
product, Samsung
's figure shows a remarkable increase in worldwide sell achieving close to 320 million
in revenue. Also
, this
growth in Samsung
’s global sale remains and make it the manufacturer with the highest amount of sale with nearly 450 million
in 2013. In contrast
, Nokia
’s revenue strikingly decreased to approximately 250 million
and took second place in that year.
On the other hand
, LG achieved third place in sales
of a given product with 110 million
income in global sales
in 2009. Also
, The two other manufacturers, Apple
and ZTE, gained fourth and five place in world wild sales
during that year with nearly 20 and 50 million
in remuneration respectively. Furthermore
, Apple
's sales
figure shows a remarkable rise in the amount of sales
and this
growth resulted in achieving 125 million
units sold in 2013. Conversely
, LG's number of units sold slowly fell until 2013 and reached roughly 80 million
. The other manufacturer, ZTEs figure doesn’t show any significant change and experienced negligible increase which is insignificant, and a gain of nearly 60 million
units sold worldwide at the end
of the period.Submitted by hedoyeraisy on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, samsung, apple, nokia, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "roughly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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