The chart shows the proportion of people in a UK survey carried out in three different years who said they were interested in certain sports.

The chart shows the proportion of people in a UK survey carried out in three different years who said they were interested in certain sports.
The bar graph illustrates the number of citizens who were interested in specific sports in 1995, 2000 and 2005.
Overall
, numerous people chose football.
In contrast
, the least number of them were chosen for golf in the given periods of time.
To begin
, between the years 1995 to 2005 football started at above 40% which gradually increased to around 45%, followed by rugby which peaked at over 25%. During the years, Swimming was registered at over 20% at the beginning which was suddenly reached among people at 30%, the next year, it dropped to around 25%
at the end
of the term.
According to
the rest of the sports, snooker was the most preferred game by folks at 30% in 1995, which fell to over 20% in the next period. In 2005 it slowly improved to 23%.
Moreover
, Tennis held approximately 28% and it was stable
at the end
of the term. Golf accounted for the lowest percentage of citizens chosen at 18%, it slightly declined to 12% in 2005.
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