The charts below show the proportion of the energy produced from different sources in a country between 1985 and 2003.
The pie charts provide information about the change in the proportion of
energy
released from a variety of sources in a country from 1985 to 2003. Overall
, comparing both the
years, the maximum increase in the Correct article usage
apply
energy
ejected was evident from coal where the increase was by 14%.
To begin
with,in 1985,the predominant amount of the energy
was from oil that
Correct pronoun usage
which
makes
up 52%, followed by nuclear plants and natural gas which produced 22% and 13% respectively. Wrong verb form
made
Energy
from coal plants was twice the energy
emitted from Hydro sources. The least amount of energy
was produced by other renewable sources accounting for 1% of overall
energy
consumption.
It is evident that in 2005 as well, oil was the major source of energy
as it was in the previous year . In 2005,energy
from natural gas and coal was almost the same with only one percentage difference between them. Nuclear power plants released
twice the Wrong verb form
release
energy
emitted by both hydro and other renewable resources.Submitted by kavitha7797 on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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