The chart below shows numbers of adults participating in different major sports in one area, in 1997 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The column graph exemplifies the comparison of the number of people participating in several sports (Gentle walking, Basketball, Cricket, Jogging, Gym(aerobic), Football and Hiking) in the years 1997 and 2017. The data is measured in thousandths.
Overall
, the number of adults involved in Gentle walking is at the highest whereas
people participating in Basketball are the lowest among all.
In years
1997 and 2017, people supporting the gym (aerobic) were equal in Correct article usage
the years
that is
approximately 35 thousand.Submitted by poojapatil0213 on
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