The chart below gives information about how families on one country spent their weekly income 1968 and in 2018
The chart demonstrates data points about weekly
household
expenditure in a specific country in 1968 and 2018. First of all, we can group the expenditure post into primary spending and leisure. Primary spending includes food, housing, fuel & Use synonyms
power
, clothing and footwear, Correct word choice
and power
household
goods, personal goods, and transport.
Use synonyms
Although
Linking Words
the
Correct article usage
apply
household
goods spending stayed at 8%, housing and transportation expenses both rose by 9% and 6% Use synonyms
due to
higher price inflation in properties and vehicles. The rest of the primary spending posts experienced Linking Words
slight
decrease Correct article usage
a slight
by
2.5%-5% except for food spending. We can see a significant decrease of half the percentage Change preposition
of
on
spending Change preposition
of
for
food in 2018 compared to 50 years earlier. Change preposition
on
In contrast
, modern families prefer leisure as the expense soared by 13.5%.
In summary, almost all the posts in the weekly Linking Words
household
primary spending declined in 2018 compared Use synonyms
1986
and the losing percentage went to leisure.Change preposition
to 1986
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