The graph below shows theh number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows theh number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The graph demonstrates the total tourism touring in the Caribbean islands from 2010 to 2017.
Overall
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, it is noticeable that the total increase and visitors staying on cruise ship were growing gradually.
While
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the amount of visitors staying on the island did not make considerable changes. Beginning with the total number of visitors on the reef, the line started from 1 and reached 3 in 2015, staying on the same level a year and peaking a maximum of 3,5 in 2017. Compared to the total number of tourists staying on the island, cruise livers had started with the lowest point of 0.25 and raised to 2 in 7 years.
On the other hand
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, the line that shows people who stayed on the island started almost with the same level of total line. It increased only from 0.75 to 1.5 from 2010 to 2013 and fluctuated on that level in other years without systematically growing as other lines. Even more, Caribbean islands illustrate consistent results in tourism direction in a short period.
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