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Some people with good education and experience in their field decide to move abroad to work. Why do you think that is? What problems does this cause?

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These days,
People
 who have satisfying education and experience are moving to other
countries
 to work.In my point of view,Their
country
 can not provide enough opportunities for them and it can cause a lot of issues.I will explain my opinion and problems that could happen in the upcoming paragraphs. There are majority of
people
 are skilled in their careers or jobs and many of them are working abroad.There are some causes and one of them is that they are moving to developing
countries
.Some
countries
 can not afford to pay enough money for them and they are forced to move abroad because of financial issues.
People
 can not provide enough money for their families even if they are skilled if they work in their
country
 that does not pay much and they start to go to another developed
country
.They might solve financial issues via foreign
countries
.
However
,They may lose some personal
things
 or experience with longing.One of the personal
things
 is traditional
things
.Because the environment differs
due to
countries
 or continents and demand to change
people
's lifestyles.
Also
,They used to do what
people
 around them do.When they return to their home
country
,they experience culture shock.That's why,it can cause
things
 about culture.The second one is longing.
People
 miss their family members or home
country
while
 are they foreign and they might want to fly to their home.Because They can not adapt to that environment without close
people
. In conclusion, Individuals work abroad for some reasons and it might have negative impacts on both longing and cultural habits.
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