In recent years, people watch more movies from overseas. What are the reasons for this? Should the government give financial support to local cinema to produce local films?

It has become a common habit to observe people watch international
movies
rather than their local films. There are obviously a number of reasons for
this
act.
This
essay will look at the perpetuating factors responsible for
this
and explore reasons to support the fact that our local film industries will benefit from financial aid from the government. On the
one
hand, the world has become a global village and with technological advancement, it has become easy for a person in
one
country to have access to
movies
made from different countries. Truth be told, the quality of
western
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movies
are
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quite high. A lot of
efforts
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, expertise and professionalism on the part of the actors, the producers and directors alike goes into play to produce
an
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excellent results. A scene is usually edited several times to attain
good
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outcome.
Also
, some logistics used in the
movie
production
such
as cameras are of high quality and have very good specifications that
creates
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a result appealing to the viewers.
Finally
, a number of our local actors earn amounts that are not substantial from their acting
career
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.
This
necessitates the need for them to take up these roles as
part time
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jobs to enable them
make
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ends meet. In view of
this
, they are unable to give off their best to a particular
movie
as they are usually in a hurry to move from
one
movie
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the next or
one
job to the other.
This
is not true of the international stars. Their sole work is acting. Money as known is key to achieving all of the above listed factors. The sales obtained from the local
movie
industry
isn't
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much and the team are unable to pay their workers well. It will be very beneficial if these local
movie
producers could obtain support from
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and even other
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individuals to improve editing, directing and
also
to purchase
high quality
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cameras and employ professional actors to make
movies
comparative
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to
the
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international standards.
To sum up
, financial assistance will go a long way to enhance the patronage of our local films and make them competitive
to
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foreign
movies
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • globalization
  • easy access
  • foreign movies
  • international stories
  • perspectives
  • production quality
  • special effects
  • relatability
  • universality
  • subtitles
  • dubbing
  • social media
  • online streaming platforms
  • Hollywood
  • major film industries
  • cultural identity
  • job creation
  • economic growth
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