The table in the above image shows the source of money for the police budget. The chart shows how it was spent. Both of these images capture data from the year 2017 to 2018.

The table in the above image shows the source of money for the police budget. The chart shows how it was spent. Both of these images capture data from the year 2017 to 2018.
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The table provides information about different types of sources of income for the police budget in the
years
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2017 and 2018 and the pie charts provide the figure about how
these
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money
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was spent in both
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2017 and 2018.
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, in both
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,the highest
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was received from the National Government and the majority of the income was spent on Salaries for workers.
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with, in 2017, 175.5m was collected from the National government and
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figure increased by 1.3m in the next year. A similar trend of increment was seen in other sources as well. In the initial year of the considered period, Local taxes and other sources contributed 91.2
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and 38m which increased in the subsequent year to 102.3
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and 38.5m respectively.
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, the total
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received in 2018 was higher than the
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received in 2019. In both
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, it is evident that Salary expenses contributed to the major amount of
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which is under the range from 69% to 75%. Expenses on buildings and transport stayed the same at 17%.
Money
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spent on technology increased from 8% to 15% over the given time period.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words years, money, m with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "provides" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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