A magazine wants to include contribution from its readers for an article called 'the book that influenced me most". Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influences you most. In your letter, describe what this book was about, explain how this book influenced you, say whether this book would be likely to influence other people

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter with the intent of expressing my interest in the
book
that influenced me the most. Here, I would like to describe the
book
name “To Eternal Love” which was written by the famous author Anna Lieu.
This
book
describes self-love, and how we can connect ourselves with our soul. It mainly characterizes human behaviour towards life and how we are wasting our precious time chasing other people. Personally, I am a bookworm, my thirst for knowledge does not easily quench so I prefer to read more and more books.
This
book
has helped me to heal from one of the most tragic parts of my life which always haunted me. Reading
this
book
boosts my confidence and provides me with more strength to fight against the problem. The most interesting fact is that
this
encourages me to love and prioritize myself. I would like to recommend
this
book
to all other people who have been traumatized in their professional and personal lives.
This
book
will help to overcome their anxiety and depression and they will live their life to the fullest. Hope
this
letter and information will be beneficial to others. Thanks & Regards Joe
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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