The table below gives information about population in Australia and Malaysia in 1980 and 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information about population in Australia and Malaysia in 1980 and 2002.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The display table gives information about the
population
in Australia
as well as
Malaysia in the years 1980 and 2002. In Australia in total
population
was
in
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millions in the year 1980,
it
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was 14.7 and in the year
2002
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it was 19.6. The male
population
in 1980 was 49.9% and in 2002 it was 49.9%. Female
population
in 1980 was 50.1% and in 2002 it was 50.1. The birth rate in 1980 was 1.5% and in 2002 it was 1.3%. The average annual
population
growth in 1980 was 1.2% and in 2002 it was 1.3%. The
population
aged over 65 in 1980 was 9.6% and in 2002 it was 12.4. In Malaysia, the total
population
in 1980 was 13.7% and in 2002 it was 24.3%. The male
population
in 1980 was 50.3% and in 2002 it was 50.6%. Female
population
in 1980 was 49.7% and in 2002 it was 49.4%. The birth rate in 1980 was 3.2% and in 2002 it was 2.2%. The average annual
population
in 1980 was 2.4% and in 2002 it was 2.1. The
population
aged over 65 in 1980 was 3.7% and in 2002 it was 4.3%.
To conclude
, the above information is in %. The data is on Australia and Malaysia.
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