Write about the following topic. People should choose their course of study not on the basis of their own interests, but based on the kinds of jobs they can get. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Lately, a plethora of topics is being seriously talked about among various individuals and groups, and one prominent topic is about study. There are even people who believe that studying
courses
in selection should basis on the kinds of jobs they can get. Considering social diversity and creativity, I think the course selected should be based on the student's interest.
The first point I want to emphasize is social diversity. It is a common fact that we all live in a multicultural society
as our multicultural education. To illustrate, soft music can release stress from the mind but if no music maker or writer in a society
where does the music come from？ Students only learn and study courses
that can gain more money in society
, like medical courses
, and law courses
, even though they may gain well job in the future, but also
lose the creativity and passion in their job
. Fix the agreement mistake
jobs
Therefore
, money isn't the only way to judge a person's value in society
.
In conclusion, individuals studying programs considering what opportunities that available in the market will increase their chances of getting a job and it will give the country a comparative advantage. I believe that living in a world with many variables needs character to be realistic.Submitted by rosolook on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
