The graph illustrates the rates of recycling in the households of three different countries: The UK, France and Germany from 2005-2015.
The line graph depicts the proportion of recycling the
households
in the UK
, France
and Germany between 2005 and 2015.
Overall
it is noticeable that France
had the highest percentage
of regional households
before
2009 when the UK
replaced it. Moreover
, the UK
had the largest proportion of regional households
, while
the France
obtained lowest. However
, the percentage
of the UK
and Germany increased over the period in question, while
France
decreased except final years
.
To begin
with the UK
, it increased steadily from 35 % in 2005 to 40 % in 2009 before going up to
55 % in 2011. However
, it rose marginally to over 60 % in the final years
and had the highest percentage
of recycling rates. The figure for Germany went up progressively from 20 % to under 60% in the final years
.
With regards to France
, it dropped gradually from 50 % to 30 % in 2013 before increasing to 40 % in the final years
. However
, it had the lowest percentage
of regional households
over the period in question.Submitted by dimash171206 on
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