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Nowadays, more and more university students choose to study abroad. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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These days, most
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university
students
 are often seen choosing abroad
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the
study
. I believe that
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pursuing
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in
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abroad
have
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 more advantages than disadvantages.
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the cons
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 before concluding with my opinions.
To begin
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plethora
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 of
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benefits
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in
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abroad.
This
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,
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 when
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graduate
students
 choose to
study
 in any foreign destination
then
 they can have opportunities to explore
new
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 educational system and experience it.
Moreover
, the brilliant educational system will assist them
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 their desired career paths. To illustrate,
according to
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, it has mentioned that,
students
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educational
institutionals
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institutions
 have 60% more secure
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jobs
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then
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 others.
Furthermore
, pursuing
further
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in
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abroad can help the individual to experience the work culture which they can learn and utilize in their own
country
 for the betterment of their nation.
On the other hand
, with many of the
merits
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 there
also
comes
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come
demerits
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 of the
students
 going
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abroad to
study
. When
students
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study
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it
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carries
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out
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huge amount of tuition fees from the
country
 which can hamper
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the economy
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 of the
country
.
Likewise
, tremendous numbers of
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student are settling
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abroad after completing their studies which have
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 effect
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 the development of the
country
 as the youths lack in the nation.
To sum up
, I
completly
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 believe that
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pursuing
futher
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further
 education
in
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abroad is beneficial as it provides
oppurtunities
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opportunities
 to explore and experience the different
environment
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environments
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 of the
country
.
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