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The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates , the lexicon producing unwanted material in three industries( A,B,C)
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 2000 to 2015. Nowadays,
waste
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 materials are created in large quantities. As the population grows the unwanted material
also
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 increases.
In addition
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, in
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 modern ,era there are various kinds of
waste
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 like electrical, non-degradable, food
waste
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 etc. Among these 3 companies are producing ample
tonnes
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 of garbage. In the beginning, the company "A" had produced a large tone of
waste
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 in the year 2000. At that time it produced 12
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 , in the continuous years the
waste
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 was still decreased to 9
tonnes
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 within the period of 15 years.
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 company "B" produced a moderate level of
waste
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 in the initial stage ,
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 it increased to above 9
tonnes
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 in 5 years . Industry "B" reduced the
waste
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 and now it is the least production of
waste
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.
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, at the start of the era, company "C" is the least producing of
waste
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 after a decade it is the highest producing of
waste
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 and it becomes number one among these.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words waste, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "increases" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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