The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The line graph illustrates , the lexicon producing unwanted material in three industries( A,B,C)
in
2000 to 2015.
Nowadays, Change preposition
from
waste
materials are created in large quantities. As the population grows the unwanted material also
increases. In addition
, in this
modern ,era there are various kinds of waste
like electrical, non-degradable, food waste
etc. Among these 3 companies are producing ample tonnes
of garbage.
In the beginning, the company "A" had produced a large tone of waste
in the year 2000. At that time it produced 12 tonnes
, in the continuous years the waste
was still decreased to 9 tonnes
within the period of 15 years. Additionally
company "B" produced a moderate level of waste
in the initial stage , then
it increased to above 9 tonnes
in 5 years . Industry "B" reduced the waste
and now it is the least production of waste
.
Secondly
, at the start of the era, company "C" is the least producing of waste
after a decade it is the highest producing of waste
and it becomes number one among these.Submitted by insighttribez on
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words waste, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "increases" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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