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The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The table illustrates the various changes among
people
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 who travelled internationally from 1990 to 2005. Units are measured in millions. Europe was the most popular tourist place among the five areas in all given periods. It showed an increasing trend from 1990 to 2005, with 280.2
million
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people
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 to 400.2
million
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people
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. The second place was America, which
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 had 80.5
million
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people
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 in 1990, and reached its highest number in 2000, but
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 it dropped slightly to 113.2
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. Asia and the Pacific (80.5
million
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people
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) outweighed Africa (18.2
million
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people
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) more than 4 times in 1990. And
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 they both kept inclining tendencies,
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, Asia and the Pacific still surpassed Africa, with nearly 4 times. The lowest number of
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 who preferred to travel was in the Middle East, which was 9.8
million
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people
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 in the initial year, growing to 15.8
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at the end
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 of the year. It is clearly seen that the total number of
people
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 who liked to visit abroad displayed an upward trend.
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, Europe was the most popular tourist place among the five areas in all given periods
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • International travel
  • Million
  • Trend
  • Gradual rise
  • Significant jump
  • Technological advancements
  • Increased affluence
  • Globalization
  • Rate of increase
  • Low-cost airlines
  • Ease of travel
  • Tourism promotion
  • Regional differences
  • Cultural exchange
  • Economic impact
  • Environmental concerns
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