Nowadays, more individuals are choosing healthier lifestyles given the fact of not consuming animal products, such as, meat or fish. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.

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The above para illustrates that in the modern ,era most

people

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switching their

lifestyle

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to a healthier

one

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by not consuming

non-veg

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for example

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meat, fish etc. Changing their

lifestyle

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by not consuming animal products is good but it

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has many disadvantages. In the beginning, let us see some of the positive sides of not taking

non-veg

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. Compared to vegetarians,

people

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prefer to eat meat because of its taste. Not only does taste but it

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contains various proteins and vitamins. it

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cures some types of diseases. Giving up on

non-veg

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leeds

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leads

to some health benefits , it reduces blood pressure, and heart attack improves bone strength and

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also

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maintains stamina (or) energy level. converting

lifestyle

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is not only

benefisial

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beneficial

for use it all benefits animals like fish , chickens,

goats

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and goats

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, though it has a positive side , it

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has a negative side let us see some of that. Most

people

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intake lots of animal products which leads to many health issues like heart attack, cholesterol, fat, and lack of activity. These issues make

one

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's life miserable and it is

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like a slow position which kills

people

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slowly,

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there are lots of animals are killed.

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, to make

non-veg

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dishes some animals have to sacrifice their life. not consuming fish leads to lower vitamin levels.

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, the consumption of animal products has both positive and negative sides. Changing their

lifestyle

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is good but completely avoiding something is not good. So before changing

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's ,life

one

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should think more than twice.

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Nowadays, more individuals are choosing healthier lifestyles given the fact of not consuming animal products, such as, meat or fish. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.

Your opinion

Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be a good member of society. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarkets, many small local businesses are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local businesses will bring about the death of local communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?