Nowadays, more individuals are choosing healthier lifestyles given the fact of not consuming animal products, such as, meat or fish. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.
The above para illustrates that in the modern ,era most
people
switching their lifestyle
to a healthier one
by not consuming non-veg
for example
meat, fish etc. Changing their lifestyle
by not consuming animal products is good but it also
has many disadvantages.
In the beginning, let us see some of the positive sides of not taking non-veg
. Compared to vegetarians, people
prefer to eat meat because of its taste. Not only does taste but it also
contains various proteins and vitamins. it also
cures some types of diseases. Giving up on non-veg
leeds
to some health benefits , it reduces blood pressure, and heart attack improves bone strength and Correct your spelling
leads
finally
also
maintains stamina (or) energy level. converting lifestyle
is not only benefisial
for use it all benefits animals like fish , chickens, Correct your spelling
beneficial
goats
.
Correct word choice
and goats
In addition
, though it has a positive side , it also
has a negative side let us see some of that. Most people
intake lots of animal products which leads to many health issues like heart attack, cholesterol, fat, and lack of activity. These issues make one
's life miserable and it is also
like a slow position which kills people
slowly, Moreover
there are lots of animals are killed. Add a comma
,Moreover
In addition
, to make non-veg
dishes some animals have to sacrifice their life. not consuming fish leads to lower vitamin levels.
Finally
, the consumption of animal products has both positive and negative sides. Changing their lifestyle
is good but completely avoiding something is not good. So before changing one
's ,life one
should think more than twice.Submitted by insighttribez on
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