it is better to be unemployed rather than to be employed in jobs even if people do not feel happy. What is your opinion?

There are many views on professionals’ career status, whether they are employed or unemployed. Some believe being unhappy in the office is worse than being unemployed. Unfortunately, I must disagree with

this

viewpoint.

Firstly

, it is by nature that one of the biggest purposes of a human's life is to work and contribute to their society.

Accordingly

, people will be stressed if they were to be jobless because

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that stage, they will only compare to their colleagues and experience slower growth in their careers.

However

, the first week of unemployment after graduation will probably be more enjoyable compared to the next. As time goes by, it gets worse and later questions about how the jobless people spend their time during that period are going to be asked when they apply for a job.

Secondly

, people need to understand that not everyone has the privilege to live normally without a job since many circumstances need to be considered

such

as money and future inflation. It is undeniable that the sandwich generation does not have

this

privilege and most of them live paycheck to paycheck.

Furthermore

, it

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be impossible to survive without any income if they were to live in a metropolitan city where everything is not very affordable. If in other cases the unemployed professionals have a decent saving for the future, they still need to prepare for future inflation.

To conclude

, it is acceptable to not work for a

while

, but it will be detrimental

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the

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run. Following that, there are many aspects to consider

such

as financial condition, career growth, and the environment they live in.