The diagrams below show the existing ground floor plan of a house and a proposed plan for some building work.

The diagrams below show the existing ground floor plan of a house and a proposed plan for some building work.
The given maps depict the current ground floor of a house and the plan
of
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changing it for building purposes.
Overall
, the external design and the internal wall of the
kitchen
were the few things that were the same
while
the rest changed in the new design. Currently, the
kitchen
has an internal wall with a
door
which leads to the hall. In the future, some
kitchen
furniture will be installed on the left side and the
door
will be moved down and it will be a double
door
instead
of a single
door
. The stairs in the hall will be upgraded,
as
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a
result
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the
under stairs
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storage and the hall will not be available The living room at present
also
has a wall and a
door
like the
kitchen
. The proposed plan is to remove them and the space will be enlarged as it
get
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connected to the
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entranceway
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entrance way
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