The bar chart below shows the percentage participation of men in senior development in three companies between 1980 and the year 2010 . Summaries the information by selecting and reporting in the main features, make comparisons where relevant .
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The bar chart provides information about the
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men
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development
in IBM, Microsoft and Apple companies from 1985 to 2010. Use synonyms
Overall
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participation
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in IBM Use synonyms
company
went up sharply during the period. Use synonyms
For example
, it was at around 5 % in 1985 reaching almost 25% in 1995.Linking Words
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one hand, if we focus on the Change preposition
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rate
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in Microsoft Use synonyms
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, we can notice that it went upward from 1980 reaching around 45% in 2010. Use synonyms
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around 20% in 1995 reaching around 15% in 2000. Change preposition
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around 40% in 2010. We can see that the Change preposition
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has the highest Use synonyms
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of the period.
In conclusion , after many minor fluctuations, we can notice that the rates of Linking Words
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