The bar chart below shows the percentage participation of men in senior development in three companies between 1980 and the year 2010 . Summaries the information by selecting and reporting in the main features, make comparisons where relevant .
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The bar chart provides information about the
participant
of Replace the word
participation
men
in senior development
in IBM, Microsoft and Apple companies from 1985 to 2010. Overall
, it can clearly be seen that the rates of participation
of men
in all companies rose steadily throughout the whole time farme
.
The percentage Correct your spelling
frame
participation
of men
in development
in IBM company
went up sharply during the period. For example
, it was at around 5 % in 1985 reaching almost 25% in 1995.In
one hand, if we focus on the Change preposition
On
rate
of men
in development
in Microsoft company
, we can notice that it went upward from 1980 reaching around 45% in 2010. On the other hand
, the rate
of men
Change noun form
men's
development
in Apple company
was not stable . For instance
, it declined from at
around 20% in 1995 reaching around 15% in 2000. Change preposition
apply
Then
, the rate
of men
in development
in Microsoft company
shot up at
around 40% in 2010. We can see that the Change preposition
to
participation
of men
in development
in Apple company
had the lowest rate
at over 25% at the end
of the period .Whereas
, the participation
of men
in development
in IBM company
has the highest rate
at over 50% at the end
of the period.
In conclusion , after many minor fluctuations, we can notice that the rates of participation
of men
in all companies kept increasing throughout the whole time farme
.Correct your spelling
frame
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