The plans below show the site of the airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year.

The plans below show the site of the airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year.
These maps depict the development of the
south-west
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southwest
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of the airport after one year.
Overall
, the plans show some change in departure,
arrivals
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and arrivals
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, and add more gates.
According to
what is shown,
departures
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the departures
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area has two facilities ( cafe and check-in), the cafe on the right top of the area, will be relocated to
down
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the down
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lift,
while
check in
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check-in
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( on the lift top will be
ralocated
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relocated
allocated
to the opposing side.
In addition
to that, bag drop will structured to
replaced
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the check-in.
On the other hand
, in
arrival
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the arrival
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area
will
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there will
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built
some
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apply
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facelities
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facilities
such
as a cafe on the right top and below the ATM and the
last
one
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apply
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car hire in the right corner
down
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. The security sections will be the same ( passport and customs ,
however
, the shops will
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structed
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structured
on the opposing of the security passport control.
while
sky
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the sky
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train will
replaced
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walkway
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the walkway
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.
Also
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,Also
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the gates will be more than now by 10 gates.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • terminal
  • car park
  • runways
  • redevelopment
  • proposed changes
  • expanded terminals
  • new gates
  • additional parking
  • amenities
  • navigation
  • environmental impact
  • economic impact
  • job creation
  • traffic congestion
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