In the future, more people will choose to go on holiday in their own country and not travel abroad on holiday. Do you agree or disagree?

In the future,many

people

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prefer travelling within their home

country

when compared to travelling abroad for vacations. I unequivocally believe with

this

statement for two reasons. The first reason

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, a lot of families

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would not

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be able to afford

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their holidays in a foreign

country

.

Secondly

, many feel the need to connect with their roots and

hence

would choose to travel to destinations inside the

contry

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country

. Lately, the world is technologically advancing at a rapid pace.

THe

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human

laborers

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are being replaced by high-tech machinery and

softwares

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software

that run on machine learning and artificial intelligence.

Hence

, many are at

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risk of losing their job.

This

would mean that

people

can no longer lavishly spend their savings on planning vacations abroad. The more realistic option for them would be to travel inside the

country

.

For example

,

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of Texas published a study stating that 30% of the workforce in the US

are

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going to face unemployment in the next 5 years and for 20% of

this

population, even obtaining basic necessities would be a challenge.

Furthermore

,

due to

the rise in the hustle-and-bustle culture,

people

are scared of losing their cultural heritage.

As a result

, many

people

are visiting places within the

country

that would help them build

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identity for themselves.

For example

, in India, 50

percent

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of families prefer going to holy places

such

as Varanasi during holidays, just to continue the long-lived traditions,

in addition

to keeping in

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touch

with their roots. In conclusion,

although

visiting foreign countries helps one experience different cultures, it isn't something that

every one

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can afford in the future.

Moreover

,

people

nowadays are pivoting towards learning about their own

country

and traditions before understanding the history of another

country

.

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, I believe more

people

are going to travel inside the

country

than go on fancy foreign vacations.