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Some people believe that reading books is more worthwhile than exploring the internet. Others believe that the internet has made books redundant. Discuss both views.

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In recent days, people have a lot of sources to search for knowledge
such
 as reading books or surfing the
internet
.
While
 some feel that reading book has more benefits, other prefer to think that searching the
Internet
 make them useless. It is important to admit that both views have their own benefits. In
this
 essay, I will discuss the possible reasons that support each view followed by my opinion. Many people strongly feel that reading books are more useful.
That is
 usually
due to
 the fact that when people read books they are more focused and more likely to return the information when they need it.
On the other hand
, despite the above argument, others feel just as strongly that exploring the
internet
 has more value for two reasons; that the
internet
 saves time and resources. Since the pieces of information are in our hands by our fingertips, it saves time. Assuming that they are going to the library.
Also
, It more faster than searching for the information in the book. In conclusion, it seems to me that exploring the
internet
 is a good idea because it is beneficial.
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