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The Only Reason For Learning A Foreign Language Is Work Or Travel . To what extent do you agree or disagree.?

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In today's world, a
language
 can be learned in many ways. It is mostly preferred for working or travelling.
While
 other options may be
such
 as
,
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 studying, communicating and so on. In
this
 essay, I will talk about the ways of learning a new vocabulary. A lot of people travel to foreign countries which they want to spend time in. They usually do it without knowing the mother
language
 of that country. But as they get to know the culture, the people and the atmosphere, new interactions will be kept which will lead to a knowledge of that
language
.
Although
 it doesn't seem too strong, it's just a beginning. I personally think that learning a new
language
while
 travelling is great. Not only do you get to know the basics, but
also
 get to learn from the natives. Learning languages by working,
on the other hand
, might be a little bit challenging as it introduces strong and job-related words. But I genuinely believe that learning something by working is the best
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 because you get most of the experience from jobs. You train to speak other languages in university, but it's not as effective as being experienced in working. Most of the jobs which require more speaking foreign languages are quite common as in
this
 area everybody tries to learn a new
language
. Despite these facts being stated, I strongly think that a lot of things can be a factor in
language
 learning. But the most important thing would be, perseverance and being surrounded by people who speak the
language
 you want to speak.
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