You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You are planning to go and study English at a school overseas. You would like some information about their courses. Write a letter to the school. In your letter • ask about the school • say what kind of accommodation you want • mention any special requests you have (for example diet).

Dear Sir I am writing to know the information about the school that I'm going to study at next year and have heard your school is a highly rated institution In fact my parents would be proud of me if I enrolled on your institution. Of course, I want it too By the way about accommodation, it would be nice if a flat located near the school and had good conditions to study. If it is possible could you tell me about the food? Many pupils say that foods are good, but I'm vegetarian and I prefer vegetables to meat, because , I think the life of animals matters.

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is all I want . Thank you for reading my letter I'm looking forward to your feedback. Yours faithfully, Ulugbek.

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

130 words

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