People often find it difficult to adapt to new situations in their lives. Why do you think this is? What measures can you suggest to make it easier?

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The following essay claims that it is quite difficult for people to get accustomed to new situations and changes in their lives. It may be possible because in

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case, they may be out of their comfort zone and

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leads to anxiety. There are lots of ways to overcome that

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as starting to change their lives gradually, or still being busy with their previous hobbies as before during their free time. First and foremost, as I mentioned before adapting to new situations means being out of the comfort zone, which means that people may feel anxiety, feel stressed or maybe even depressed. It is a regular response for living beings to new situations, and after some

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they usually get used to

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lifestyle. As I mentioned before one of the best ways to change the lifestyle gradually in

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case, it will be much easier to adapt to a new lifestyle.

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, if a person moves somewhere else, it may be better for them still continue to be busy with their hobbies and making new acquaintances and friends. There is a probability that they will not focus on the changes

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if they will be busy all the time.

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, I would like to mention that the majority of institutions (mostly universities) provide help for

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international students. As an example, they may provide orientation programs and immigration advice for international students. And

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may make the

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a little bit easier.

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difficulties during

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is being out of your comfort zone.

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is probably,

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changes gradually and

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hobbies.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

6.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

290 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Fear of the unknown
Comfort zone
Familiar
Inherently uncertain
Challenges
Necessary tools
Skills
Efficiently
Emotional ties
Stress and anxiety
Overwhelming
Cultural backgrounds
Social backgrounds
Adaptable
Change management
Coping strategies
Resilience
Support network
Preparation
Flexibility

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People often find it difficult to adapt to new situations in their lives. Why do you think this is? What measures can you suggest to make it easier?

Fully explain your ideas

In some cities public parks and open space are being changed into gardens where local residents can grow their own fruits and vegetables. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Some expert believe that is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do they advantage of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that children should study all subjects at school, while others think they should only study subjects they are good at or find interesting. Discuss both views and give your opinion.