the bar chart below show the diffent level of men and women in Australia in 1999
Looking at
this
bar chart we can see the ratio of women
and men
for the different degrees and diploma levels and see which has the most females and males. we can get this
type of graph from college’s file safes and a survey in-person or online.
If you look at the graph you will notice that most men
take the skilled vocational diploma, Around 90% of people who take this
course are men
while
only 10% are women
. I think the reason behind this
is that men
usually like to work straight away rather than study and get a good degree.
on the ,
contrary you can see that more Remove the comma
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women
than men
are taking the undergraduate diploma, Around double the percentage, in ,addition females are more prone to get their bachelor's degree than men
we can figure from looking at this
bar graph that women
are taking their studies very serious than man.Submitted by hmody_b on
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