the bar chart below show the diffent level of men and women in Australia in 1999

the bar chart below show the diffent level of men and women in Australia in 1999
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Looking at
this
bar chart we can see the ratio of
women
and
men
for the different degrees and diploma levels and see which has the most females and males. we can get
this
type of graph from college’s file safes and a survey in-person or online. If you look at the graph you will notice that most
men
take the skilled vocational diploma, Around 90% of people who take
this
course are
men
while
only 10% are
women
. I think the reason behind
this
is that
men
usually like to work straight away rather than study and get a good degree. on the
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contrary you can see that more
women
than
men
are taking the undergraduate diploma, Around double the percentage, in ,addition females are more prone to get their bachelor's degree than
men
we can figure from looking at
this
bar graph that
women
are taking their studies very serious than man.
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