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In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion

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In various countries all over the world, fast
food
becomes
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 one of the most popular dishes
due to
the
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convenient
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 and
the
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attraction.
However
, Citizens are over-consuming
this
food
,
consequently
, The issues
for
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the
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health
also
 increase significantly.
Hence
, It is believed that Governments should put a
tax
 to be higher on fast
food
. In my opinion, I totally agree
in
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 the idea, which depends on the awareness and the influence of each person. The reasons and
explains
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 are going to be analyzed and evaluated in
this
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First,
one of the main
reason
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reasons
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 why citizens disagree that it is not essential for the government to impose a higher
tax
 on
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fast
food
 is
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awareness. Even
the
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 rising cost of fast
food
, buyers
also
 want to consume
this
food
. They will not see the attraction of other kinds, and fast
food
 will be
also
 the most when selecting.
Therefore
, The consciousness of each person will be
more
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 effective solution. If these consumers are aware
to choose
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of choosing
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 the kinds of
food
 that do not influence them, these issues
such
 as
overweight
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being overweight
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 can be solved. In the future, when consumers can choose
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suitable foods, the number of people having these problems
is
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also
 decrease significantly.
However
, these buyers may be not self-conscious
on
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 fast
food
, they need considerable impacts which can change their
mind
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minds
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 and imposing a higher
tax
 is
this
 main impact.
Moreover
, Not all
of
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consumers can buy fast
food
 at
high
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 cost, so they
also
 must change their diet to be more reasonable.
Second,
there are other benefits why fast
food
 should be put a higher
tax
. One of which is the improvement of other kinds of
food
. When using more suitable foods for the health and body, these dishes will be
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as important
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 as fast
food
 nowadays.
Thus
, the ingredients will be
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higher
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 than before, which makes the cost
in
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 all products
to become
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more
balance
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. It is essential to avoid economic issues
such
 as inequality of product or loss of product value. In conclusion, It is argued that Governments should put a
tax
 to be higher on fast
food
. I suppose that I totally agree
in
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 the idea, since It depends on the awareness and the influence of each person.
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