The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The line graph shown shows the amount of
waste
three companies wasted in tonnes, The line graph shows what changed in the companies' waste
production over 15 years.
After looking at the chart you can say that company
B has changed the most unlike their counterparties, Further
inspection shows that the point where the waste
reduction happened was around 2005. Losing over six tonnes of waste
in 10 years is a remarkable doing compared to the other two associations.
While
Company
B took a positive route you can't say the same happened with Company
A,
Unlike their counterparties company
A’ٍٍs waste
was up to 6 tonnes from 2000 to 2015. The most up in misuse was from 2010 to 2015.
Unlike the other two companies, the association took a slow approach. Even though the misuse reduction was slow it was a reduction nonetheless
. Gradually lowering their waste
production by more than three tones in the 15 years the graph shows.Submitted by hmody_b on
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