The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The line graph shown shows the amount of

waste

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three companies wasted in tonnes, The line graph shows what changed in the companies'

waste

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production over 15 years. After looking at the chart you can say that

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B has changed the most unlike their counterparties,

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inspection shows that the point where the

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reduction happened was around 2005. Losing over six tonnes of

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in 10 years is a remarkable doing compared to the other two associations.

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Company

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B took a positive route you can't say the same happened with

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A, Unlike their counterparties

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A’ٍٍs

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was up to 6 tonnes from 2000 to 2015. The most up in misuse was from 2010 to 2015. Unlike the other two companies, the association took a slow approach. Even though the misuse reduction was slow it was a reduction

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. Gradually lowering their

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production by more than three tones in the 15 years the graph shows.

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The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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