The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The line graph shown shows the amount of

waste

three companies wasted in tonnes, The line graph shows what changed in the companies'

waste

production over 15 years. After looking at the chart you can say that

company

B has changed the most unlike their counterparties,

Further

inspection shows that the point where the

waste

reduction happened was around 2005. Losing over six tonnes of

waste

in 10 years is a remarkable doing compared to the other two associations.

While

Company

B took a positive route you can't say the same happened with

Company

A, Unlike their counterparties

company

A’ٍٍs

waste

was up to 6 tonnes from 2000 to 2015. The most up in misuse was from 2010 to 2015. Unlike the other two companies, the association took a slow approach. Even though the misuse reduction was slow it was a reduction

nonetheless

. Gradually lowering their

waste

production by more than three tones in the 15 years the graph shows.

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