The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the US and Japan between March 1993 and March 1999.
The graph illustrates the statistical movements of unemployment rates in the US and Japan over six years from
March
1993 to March
1999.
Overall
, both of the line statistics fluctuated. However
, Japan experienced growth throughout six years, while
the US decreased.
Starting with Japan’s data, at the beginning of the period, the percentage of the workforce began at 2.5. Then
, it increased significantly to above 3.5 in the following year. After facing a gradual rise to 4.5 in March
1996, it decreased to 4.0 in the mid-1996. Nevertheless
, it ascended again in the next period until in March
1998 stood at 5.25 before experiencing a fall to 5.0 in March
1999.
Moving on to the US data, it started at 7.0 in March
1993. Afterwards, it declined constantly to 5.5 in March
1995 before experiencing a slight growth to 6.0 in the mid-1995. Furthermore
, it continuously dropped down to 5.0 in early 1997. Additionally
, the line statistic showed a stable movement From March
1997 to March
1999 at around 5.0.Submitted by zakiyaartanti19 on
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