The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the US and Japan between March 1993 and March 1999.

The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the US and Japan between March 1993 and March 1999.
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The graph illustrates the statistical movements of unemployment rates in the US and Japan over six years from
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1993 to
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1999.
Overall
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, both of the line statistics fluctuated.
However
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, Japan experienced growth throughout six years,
while
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the US decreased. Starting with Japan’s data, at the beginning of the period, the percentage of the workforce began at 2.5.
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, it increased significantly to above 3.5 in the following year. After facing a gradual rise to 4.5 in
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1996, it decreased to 4.0 in the mid-1996.
Nevertheless
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, it ascended again in the next period until in
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1998 stood at 5.25 before experiencing a fall to 5.0 in
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1999. Moving on to the US data, it started at 7.0 in
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1993. Afterwards, it declined constantly to 5.5 in
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1995 before experiencing a slight growth to 6.0 in the mid-1995.
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, it continuously dropped down to 5.0 in early 1997.
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, the line statistic showed a stable movement From
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1997 to
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1999 at around 5.0.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Unemployment rate
  • Trend
  • Comparison
  • Period
  • Sharp increase/decrease
  • Correlation
  • Economic policies
  • Technological advancements
  • Global economic conditions
  • Consumer spending
  • Social welfare
  • Public sentiment
  • Predictions
  • Economic strategies
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