The bar chart below shows the estimated sales of Jeans for two companies next year in Turkey.The pie chart shows the projected market share of the two companies in Jeans at the end of next year.

The bar chart below shows the estimated sales of Jeans for two companies next year in Turkey.The pie chart shows the projected market share of the two companies in Jeans at the end of next year.
The bar graph illustrates the forecasts about the sale number of jeans from two manufacturers for the next
year
in Turkey, and the pie chart demonstrates their
market
share as predictions during the given period.
Overall
, the bar graph indicates that
at the end
of the next
year
,
although
mango and Jack and Jones estimated sales will face rises in number, the latter company is going to have a higher
market
share than the former. Focusing on the bar graph, it is predicted for the upcoming
year
, Mango sales will increase sharply from over 100 in January to more than 500 thousand pairs by August.
Thereafter
, remains approximately the same for 3 months, before a slight climb to 600,000 units of pairs.
On the other hand
,
although
its competitor, Jack and Jones, witness a significant decrease after the first month of the next
year
, from nearly half of a million to under 250 thousand pairs, it will surge dramatically for the subsequent period, reaching 250 thousand more than it rival in the same month with 850,000 sales. Regarding the estimated shares in the pie chart, Jack and Jones's company is predicted to hold a third of the
market
,
whereas
Mango will only gain a profit of a fifth in Turkish retail.
However
, for the next
year
,
while
these 2 giant companies of Turkey have 50 per cent of the
market
, other companies have the other half in the cloth industry of
this
country.
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