You have seen an advertisment from a couple, who live in Australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year. Write a letter to the couple, In you letter - Explain why you think you would be suitable for the job - say what else you could do for the family - give your reasons for wanting the job

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Dear Mrs. Smith, I have come across your advertisement in the newspaper about the need for a tutor to teach your

children

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the language for a duration of one year. I would like to apply for

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job

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as a teacher. I am suitable for

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job

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as I hold a Master's degree in the same language and

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have experience as a teacher in a reputed

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in Australia for 1 year. I can teach your

children

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other subjects as well and can even be a caretaker in your absence. As in my previous experience, I used to help other parents by keeping

children

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involved in fun activities in

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after

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time when their parents had some urgent work and would like their

children

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to stay in

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for a few more hours. I am very playful with the

children

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and can engage them in playful activities easily. I am looking for

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job

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because I recently moved to

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part of the country because of my husband's transfer and do not have a

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currently.

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, your home is very near to the place where I live, so it will just be a walking distance for me. Not only

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, as I already have prior experience of teaching

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, it will be a cakewalk for me. Looking forward for a positive reply. Yours Sincerely, James

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‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

228 words

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