The diagram shows how electricity is generated by a hydroelectric dam.
The diagram illustrates the basic principles of hydro-electricity.
The process requires the construction of a large dam coupled to a powerhouse. The damage creates a large reservoir and the powerhouse is where the electricity is generated.
First of all,
water
enters through the inlet and flows through a pipe that directs it to the turbine
, and then
the turbine
displaces the flow of water
into an artificial river.
The turbine
is connected to the generator of the power plant, the generator takes energy from the turbine
, which spins up due to
the flow of water
entering the pipe. The generator also
recycles, clean energy after, from the power plant, it takes clean energy from power lines that transmit electricity over long distances.
It is interesting , a
hydroelectric dam produces no harmful by-products and relies entirely on natural forces to generate electricity. As we noted earlier, the Correct word choice
that a
turbine
directs water
into an artificial river. This
process is renewable due to
the water
cycle in nature.Submitted by dnm.best on
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