The diagram shows how electricity is generated by a hydroelectric dam.

The diagram shows how electricity is generated by a hydroelectric dam.
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The diagram illustrates the basic principles of hydro-electricity. The process requires the construction of a large dam coupled to a powerhouse. The damage creates a large reservoir and the powerhouse is where the electricity is generated. First of all,
water
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enters through the inlet and flows through a pipe that directs it to the
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, and
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the
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displaces the flow of
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into an artificial river. The
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is connected to the generator of the power plant, the generator takes energy from the
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, which spins up
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the flow of
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entering the pipe. The generator
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recycles, clean energy after, from the power plant, it takes clean energy from power lines that transmit electricity over long distances. It is interesting ,
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hydroelectric dam produces no harmful by-products and relies entirely on natural forces to generate electricity. As we noted earlier, the
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directs
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into an artificial river.
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process is renewable
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the
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cycle in nature.
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