You have seen a Tourist Board advert welcoming nominations for a 'Best City/Town Award.' Nominate your home city/town. Write a letter to the Tourist Board. In your letter • nominate your town/city and refer to its location • explain what is special about your city/town • say how winning an award would change your city/town

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Dear Sir/ Madam, I am writing

this

letter in relation to the advertisement inviting proposals for a “Best City/

Town

Award.” I would like to represent my

town

, Collingwood.

This

beautiful

town

is located just 7 kilometres away from an adorable tourist location named Blue Mountain. On the east side of the

town

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town,

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there is a gigantic beach that

also

attracts an unlimited number of visitors. As the

town

is located in between two different famous attraction spots, there is a huge

town

mall in Collingwood where

people

can find every brand of clothes and shoes.

Furthermore

, Sunset Point where

people

can collect memories and pictures, is situated in the middle of the village.

Moreover

, the

people

of the

town

are really helpful and have a cheerful nature. If the

town

wins the award

this

might change individuals' lives as,

due to

this

, it might become a more popular attraction for

people

around the country. Expansion of business might be the other outcome of winning the award. I hope that you will consider my suggestion, I will be waiting for your response. Yours sincerely, Navneet Kaur.

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Provide more specific examples of what makes Collingwood special, such as unique local events or landmarks.

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Ensure that each paragraph has a single clear idea and remember to elaborate on those ideas for greater clarity.

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The letter maintains a positive and enthusiastic tone which is appropriate for the purpose.

coherence cohesion

The letter has a clear structure with a proper greeting and closing.

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

185 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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