You have seen a Tourist Board advert welcoming nominations for a 'Best City/Town Award.' Nominate your home city/town. Write a letter to the Tourist Board. In your letter • nominate your town/city and refer to its location • explain what is special about your city/town • say how winning an award would change your city/town
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am writing
this
letter in relation to the advertisement inviting proposals for a “Best City/Town
Award.” I would like to represent my town
, Collingwood. This
beautiful town
is located just 7 kilometres away from an adorable tourist location named Blue Mountain. On the east side of the town
there is a gigantic beach that Add a comma
town,
also
attracts an unlimited number of visitors.
As the town
is located in between two different famous attraction spots, there is a huge town
mall in Collingwood where people
can find every brand of clothes and shoes. Furthermore
, Sunset Point where people
can collect memories and pictures, is situated in the middle of the village. Moreover
, the people
of the town
are really helpful and have a cheerful nature.
If the town
wins the award this
might change individuals' lives as, due to
this
, it might become a more popular attraction for people
around the country. Expansion of business might be the other outcome of winning the award.
I hope that you will consider my suggestion, I will be waiting for your response.
Yours sincerely,
Navneet Kaur.Submitted by ss6802125 on
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Provide more specific examples of what makes Collingwood special, such as unique local events or landmarks.
coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph has a single clear idea and remember to elaborate on those ideas for greater clarity.
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The letter maintains a positive and enthusiastic tone which is appropriate for the purpose.
coherence cohesion
The letter has a clear structure with a proper greeting and closing.