You have seen a Tourist Board advert welcoming nominations for a 'Best City/Town Award.' Nominate your home city/town. Write a letter to the Tourist Board. In your letter • nominate your town/city and refer to its location • explain what is special about your city/town • say how winning an award would change your city/town

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Dear Sir/ Madam, I am writing

this

letter in relation to the advertisement inviting proposals for a “Best City/

Town

Award.” I would like to represent my

town

, Collingwood.

This

beautiful

town

is located just 7 kilometres away from an adorable tourist location named Blue Mountain. On the east side of the

town

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town,

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there is a gigantic beach that

also

attracts an unlimited number of visitors. As the

town

is located in between two different famous attraction spots, there is a huge

town

mall in Collingwood where

people

can find every brand of clothes and shoes.

Furthermore

, Sunset Point where

people

can collect memories and pictures, is situated in the middle of the village.

Moreover

, the

people

of the

town

are really helpful and have a cheerful nature. If the

town

wins the award

this

might change individuals' lives as,

due to

this

, it might become a more popular attraction for

people

around the country. Expansion of business might be the other outcome of winning the award. I hope that you will consider my suggestion, I will be waiting for your response. Yours sincerely, Navneet Kaur.

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Provide more specific examples of what makes Collingwood special, such as unique local events or landmarks.

coherence cohesion

Ensure that each paragraph has a single clear idea and remember to elaborate on those ideas for greater clarity.

task achievement

The letter maintains a positive and enthusiastic tone which is appropriate for the purpose.

coherence cohesion

The letter has a clear structure with a proper greeting and closing.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

185 words

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nomination
welcoming
geographical
historical
cultural
recreational
diversity
demographic
cuisine
community spirit
architectural heritage
landmarks
reputation
boost tourism
investment
adaptive reuse of spaces
urban renewal
sustainable travel destination
flourishing arts scene
culinary delights

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