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Some people suggest that children do not understand the world of work and schools should make all teenagers spend a short time working as well as studying academic subjects. To what extent do you agree?

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Nowadays, it is said that young people are not aware of the working environment and schools should send children to
work
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 placements so that they can
work
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along with
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 studying the main course. In my point of view, I partly agree with
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 statement and the explanations will be included in
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, working part-time before having an official job can provide teenagers with various experiences
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 they are still studying at school.
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, children could know what skills are necessary and needed for a job and prepare better for them.
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 is very convenient as they can gain practical knowledge about their future job and some years of experience earlier than usual.
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, spending time and effort to
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 can help teenagers realize the value of money, which is
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essential.
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, when they are in a working environment, children have to
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 very hard and they will know that it is not simple to make cash.
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, they will cherish the precious money and the hard
work
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 of their parents.
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,
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, spending time working and studying at school at the same time can interrupt students’ academic progress.
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, students would have many concerns about their
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 or
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 money that they cannot focus completely on their
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.
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, children’s scores at school will be lower than expected.
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, working
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 they are still students has more benefits than disadvantages. It is expected that in the future,
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 method will be more common.
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