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The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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The picture displays the amount of
visitors
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 staying on
cruise
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ships
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 and an
island
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 and the amount of total
visitors
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 from 2010 to 2017.
Overall
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, the trends of
visitors
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 staying on
cruise
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ships
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 and the
island
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 grow, and a similar trend could be seen for the trend of total
visitors
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.
In addition
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, for most of the period, the number of
visitors
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 staying on the
island
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 was higher than that of those staying on
cruise
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ships
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. In 2010, the figure of tourists visiting on
island
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 standing at around 0.75
million
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 was higher than that of those visiting on
cruise
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ships
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, with almost 0.25
million
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. Between 2010 and 2013, that of those visiting the
island
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 increased to almost 1.5
million
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, meanwhile, that of those visiting on
cruise
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ships
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 fluctuated. In 2013 and 2015, that of those visiting the
island
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 stabilized.
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, that of those visiting on
cruise
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ships
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 climbed to nearly 1.25
million
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. From 2015 to 2016, the number of people staying on the
island
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 decreased to 0.75
million
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, but the opposite was observed on that of those staying on
cruise
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ships
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, meanwhile, that of all
visitors
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 kept at roughly 2.75
million
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 before rising to 3.5
million
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 in 2017.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words visitors, cruise, ships, island, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuating trend
  • initially
  • significant increase
  • slight decline
  • momentary setback
  • steady increase
  • minor fluctuations
  • reaching a peak
  • moderate growth
  • notable growth
  • surge in popularity
  • seasonal or yearly factors
  • stagnation
  • growing appeal
  • visitors worldwide
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