The bar chart below shows the estimated sales of Jeans for two companies next year in Turkey.The pie chart shows the projected market share of the two companies in Jeans at the end of next year.
The bar chart displays the prediction of sales of
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year
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share in Use synonyms
jeans
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at the end
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year
in Turkey.
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, it has been predicted that the number of sold Linking Words
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for both companies is going to increase, Use synonyms
while
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Jones
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at the end
of next Linking Words
year
.
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To begin
, the quantity of pants for Mango that will be sold in January is 100,000. It has been estimated that the sales of Linking Words
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at the end
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, the predicted sales for Linking Words
jeans
in Jack& Use synonyms
Jones
will be 450 at the beginning of the next Use synonyms
year
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Although
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,
its estimated quantity will be dropped by half of its initial value in the second month, its predicted wholesale of Remove the comma
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jeans
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next December.
As for the pie chart, it is expected that the Use synonyms
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part of Jack& Use synonyms
Jones
will be 30% and the relative ratio of Mango will be two-thirds of Jack& Use synonyms
Jones
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while
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market
stake for other brands will be half of all.Use synonyms
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