The pie charts below compare water usagein san diago california and rest of the world
The three pie charts depict the
water
usage
in San
Diego
, California
and the rest of the world
.It is eviden
that there are three Correct your spelling
evident
evidence
type
of Change to a plural noun
types
water
usages
Fix the agreement mistake
usage
where
Rephrase
apply
as
, residential, industry and agriculture.
Looking from an Change preposition
apply
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that the residential term was the most water
usage
in San
Diego
and California
while
, in
the Change preposition
apply
world
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worldwide
wide
has Add the comma(s)
,wide
showd
Correct your spelling
shown
showed
least
Correct article usage
the least
water
usage
.
Looking at the details, we can see that water
usage
by residential
in Replace the word
residents
San
Diego
and California
was 60% and 39% respectively,when compared worldwide it drastically decreased by about 8%.Looking at water
usage
in San
Diego
and the rest of the world
the industry remains unchanged in percentage by about 23%, whereas
California
display
a 10% Change the verb form
displays
increasing
of about 33%.
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increase
Moreover
,the San
Diego
and California
agriculture showed 17% and 28%,however
when looking to
the rest of the Change preposition
at
world
it dramatically rose about nearly three quarter
about 69%.Fix the agreement mistake
quarters
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