The graph bellow shows the number of visitors to three museums between 2000 and 2010.
The bar chart demonstrates the
number
of people who visited three museums in millions, namely MET, Edo
and the National Museum
over a period of 6 years from 2000 to 2010.
The numbers of visitors who went to MET in New York and Edo
in Tokyo from 2000 to 2005 have the same trend. Firstly
, the years from 2000 to 2001 saw a considerable decline in the number
of people visiting MET in New York from 12 million
to 6 million
, which was followed by a levelling off until one year, then
rising to 14 million
in 2005. Secondly
, A gradual decrease can be found in the number
of individuals who visit Edo
in Tokyo from 13 million
in 2000 to 6.1 million
in 2003, after which the trend showed a moderate increase to 10 million
in 2001.
However
, the number
of people visiting the National Museum
in China shows a different trend. There is a dramatic increase in the number
of individuals who visit the National Museum
from 6 million
in 2000 to 16 million
in 2003.
In total, the quantity of individuals going to Edo
in Tokyo was at the first place, then
dropping at the last
place at the end
. On the other hand
, the number
of the National Museum
was the lowest, then
rising at the first place in the final stageSubmitted by 365247495 on
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