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Missions to explore space are hugely expensive, and there are problems on Earth which demand attention. The number of these missions needs to be reduced. Do you agree or disagree?

#missions #space #earth #demand #attention
One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is
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 of
space
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missions
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 needs to be reduced. Now people are
beginnig
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beginning
 to realize that there are other problems on the Earth which
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 attention. Personally, I tend to think that I disagree
due to
 the exploring
space
 is
significant
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 step in
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humanity
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 development,
otherwise
, it should be more number of these missions
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 to be enhanced.
Firstly
, it is well known that aerospace improved in terrain orientation. What I mean here is that satellite helpful for people who
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 not oriente in the environment. A good case in point is
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 of unknown landscape for
tourrist
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tourist
tourists
 who travels around the world. So,
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 helps
tourrist
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tourist
tourists
 to find an exact place.
On the other hand
, it can
also
 be argued that important scientific
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 and
prediction
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 about our lifetime.
That is
 to
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 some discovery changes outlooks of
space
. Take
for example
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 recent discovery of
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 hole.
That
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 pictures
was
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 taken by Event Horizon Telescope. Before the photo, we just
imagianed
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imagined
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 a black hole as a dead star which does not
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the
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light
due to
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 gravity of
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. In fact, our imagination
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 right and we divided a black hole
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 three parts.
As a result
, changed the whole idea of the
space
 and everything that consists of it. In conclusion, taking everything mentioned into account in our final analysis we can say that we should not reduce some number of these missions and just wait to
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substatial
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substantial
 breakthrough.
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