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You have received an important document that needs to be translated. Write a letter to your friend and ask him/her to translate this important document for you. In your letter, explain - •why it is important for you •how fast you need it back •why you need his/her expertise

#document #friend #•why #•how #expertise
Hello, dear John, I hope
this
 letter finds you well. I beg for your help with some important
letter
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, that I get
within
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 my job. First of all, you know that I'm studying
French
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the French
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 language
ongoing
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, because I'm working in the international department.
But
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 the level of my writing skills is still not enough.
Furthermore
, I can understand at all what
this
 letter is about, but unfortunately, I have to write an answer. I need to be very careful with the data which I have to include
to
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 my document.
I
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really afraid that my tongue level is not enough for
such
 kind of document. Unfortunately, I have to write it up
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this
 Friday in the afternoon.
Moreover
, as you are an expert in
this
 field, you can give me
an
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 advice for better writing. So, please, let me know if you can support me in
this
 issue. Sincerely
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, Anastassia.
Submitted by anastasia on

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coherence cohesion
Make sure to organize your thoughts into clear paragraphs, each focusing on a single idea or point. For example, one paragraph could be dedicated to explaining why the document is important, another to how quickly you need it back, and so on.
task achievement
For a more complete response, provide additional details where necessary. For instance, specify the context or the content of the document to give your friend a better understanding of how crucial it is.
writing tone
You maintained a polite and respectful tone throughout the letter, which is appropriate for this context.
completeness
You've included all the required information, making it clear why you need the translation and the urgency of the request.
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