You have received an important document that needs to be translated. Write a letter to your friend and ask him/her to translate this important document for you. In your letter, explain - •why it is important for you •how fast you need it back •why you need his/her expertise

#document #friend #•why #•how #expertise

Hello, dear John, I hope

this

letter finds you well. I beg for your help with some important

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, that I get

within

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my job. First of all, you know that I'm studying

French

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the French

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language

ongoing

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, because I'm working in the international department.

But

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the level of my writing skills is still not enough.

Furthermore

, I can understand at all what

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letter is about, but unfortunately, I have to write an answer. I need to be very careful with the data which I have to include

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my document.

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really afraid that my tongue level is not enough for

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kind of document. Unfortunately, I have to write it up

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this

Friday in the afternoon.

Moreover

, as you are an expert in

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field, you can give me

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advice for better writing. So, please, let me know if you can support me in

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issue. Sincerely

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, Anastassia.

Submitted by anastasia on Wed Jul 31 2024

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coherence cohesion

Make sure to organize your thoughts into clear paragraphs, each focusing on a single idea or point. For example, one paragraph could be dedicated to explaining why the document is important, another to how quickly you need it back, and so on.

task achievement

For a more complete response, provide additional details where necessary. For instance, specify the context or the content of the document to give your friend a better understanding of how crucial it is.

writing tone

You maintained a polite and respectful tone throughout the letter, which is appropriate for this context.

completeness

You've included all the required information, making it clear why you need the translation and the urgency of the request.

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
10Grammar mistakes
 

5 paragraphs

152 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

While it is sometimes thought that prison is the best place for criminals, others believe that there are better ways to deal with them. What is your opinion?

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